11.22托福上午场写作范文| 领导者能力+科技迅速发展好坏

昨天, 托福已经开放了26年考位其中1月4天(7场)考试都是改革前的考试今年12月也新增了28日考位今年申请还要刷分的同学抓紧啦!今天上午考试2套都是老题有些难度但还在团里的学习范围内第1套


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保护ash trees的3种方式

关于如何防止真菌在一种树上去传播,然后他给了三个方法:

第一个方法是说可以通过砍掉那些死的树或者被感染的树去防止真菌传播。

第二个方法是关于使用杀真菌的药物,去防止真菌传播。

第三种是通过基因改造的方法,制造出这种抗真菌的树,然后这个听力就反驳他这3个点

学术讨论写作

Dr. Diaz:Let's discuss the skill most need by peopre who want to start and run their own business. Some experts propose that future business people should focus on improving their sales techniques-after all, if you cannot sell your product, you will soon be out of business. Others believe that these future business people wouldbenefit most from learning management skills, such as how to lead teams and motivate employees. Which view do you agree with? why?

审题注意点:

(1)这个题重复了25年9.13日 和 11月1日考题。

again,提醒大家: 刚考过的题目大家也一定也要纳入复习范围。

(2) 难度中等上。话题本身是生活化的,但是很多中国同学都比较缺乏商业创业经验,所以分析起来有些难度。最好的方法就是联系自己了解的出名的是商人.比如:乔布斯Jobs。每次苹果发新产品就会召开隆重的全球发布会,详细地介绍/推销自己的产品。成功地引爆了市场。

反向分析原因:因为苹果每次做的都是颠覆性的产品,比如第一只智能手机iphone, 智能手表iwatch.. 所以都非常需要优秀地推销能力,让市场接受他们的产品。比如,马云。(团里day9视频范文讲解过马云事例.在day9-举例方法中讲解过类似题目”对于领导者-沟通能力和技术能力,哪个更重要?“ , 里面详细讲过马云的例子。)

马云最厉害的地方在于管理和愿景(vision)

- 他创立阿里巴巴时,首先要做的就是组建团队。他集合了“十八罗汉”,这支团队在公司初期发挥了巨大的作用。也说服了孙正义拉来了千万美元的投资。 这体现了出色的招聘和团队组建能力

- 他非常擅长激励员工。他提出的“让天下没有难做的生意”的愿景,不仅仅是一个口号,更是一种强大的精神力量,激励着成千上万的员工为之奋斗。这种激励能力远比单纯的销售技巧更能驱动公司的长期发展。

反向分析原因:

当面临这样一项非常困难、复杂且前所未有的工作任务时/当刚开始起步创业的时候, 单凭一个人的销售能力是远远不够的。就需要领导者有高超的协调和鼓励能力去鼓励和激励员工一起奋斗。

参考范文:

I believe that management skills, especially leadership, are the most essential abilities for future entrepreneurs.Whilesales techniques can generate short-term profit, management determines whether a business can survive and expand. Starting a company requires not only a promising product but also a motivated team and sufficient funding, all of which rely on strong management skills.

Consider Jack Ma.In the 1990s, he had neither money nor technical expertise. However, his leadership enabled him to persuade investors like Masayoshi Son to fund his vision and to attract top programmers from elite universities. These people did not join him for high salaries but for the dream he communicated.His ability to inspire, coordinate, and manage resources transformed Alibaba from an idea into a global enterprise.

To conclude,....


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学术讨论写作

Dr. AchebeIn the past, progresses in science and technology were generally slow. However, in recent decades, the pace of technological progress has dramatically accelerated, with new discoveries and inventions almost everyday. Some argue that the rapid advancement of science and technology is beneficial for society as a whole and should be encouraged. Others believe that this progress is happening too quickly and may lead to serious issues. Which viewpoint do you agree with?Claire:The faster the discoveries, the better. For example, due to advancements in medicine, our lives are much better than those of our great grandparents. Back then, life expectancy was significantly shorter due to a lack of medication whereas today, drugs are affordable and accessible. Anyone with a severe illness hopes forrapid scientific progress.Andrew:Most people don't have a say in the implementation of these new inventions, and that fact worries me. Just think about the wide spread unemployment caused by the automation of many jobs: in this era of rapid technological change, it has become commonplace. People who lose the jobs may not believe that this progress is beneficial.审题注意点:

1. 这道题重复了 23年8月28日的家考题目。

这是一道很多同学可能会觉得难的题目。因为题目包含的范围比较宽泛。

其次,题目需要回答的是:therapidadvancement ofscience and technology

并不是:the advancement of science and technology

这2者的区别还是很大的。

因为科技的进步肯定是对人类社会带来了巨大的好处,这是毋庸置疑的,也没什么好讨论的。

而the rapid advancement 科技的快速发展,则有利有弊了。大家可以从其他2位同学的讨论中获得一些思路。比如,

Claire: 医学的快速发展, 使得很多疾病都被治愈了,人们的寿命被极大地延长.

(这个其实是第一套官方范文中的思路。 看来,官方也会改编自己写过的内容😁。 官方这篇范文,团里在day1/2仔细分析过。)

Andrew: 自动化的发展,导致很多流水线上的工人失业。

这2位同学的思路都很好。大家可以同意,采用。但是要增加不同的例子论证。

比如,科技快速发展才能迅速治疗疾病,使得人类免于疾病死亡的恐惧。比如Covid-19疫苗/猪流感疫苗的快速发现,才拯救了全球数亿人的生命。这个时候。没人会抱怨科技科技发展太快了。(A compelling example is the development ofCOVID-19 vaccines. In the past, vaccine researchtook decades,but scientists utilizedadvanced mRNA technologyto produce a solution in less than a year.This rapid responsesaved hundreds of millions of lives and restored global stability.)

或者:

同意Andrew的观点. 现代科技确实发展太快了,因为超出了人们可以deal with/适应的速度了。比如,ai 人工智能的发展使得很多人失业,尤其是年龄大的人or 贫穷的人, 这些人如果没有精力or金钱去学习ai,就很容易被淘汰。

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