6.6 雅思写作考情解析 地图题与driving话题写作指导

Task one:地图题:一个大学区域的10年变化地图题写作句型:

1)原有设施保留不变

…(建筑名) remained intact throughout the whole timeframe without any reconstruction.remained intact 保持原样;reconstruction 改造翻新

Situated in the southern corner, the original … was preserved in its initial location.situated in 坐落于;preserved 被保留;initial location 原址

2)原有建筑拆除 / 改建

The former … was demolished to make room for newly-built …demolished 被拆除;make room for 为… 腾出空间;newly-built 新建的

What used to be a farmland was converted into a residential zone after renovation.used to be 曾经是;be converted into 被改造为;residential zone 住宅区;renovation 改建

3)全新设施修建落成

A brand-new shopping complex sprang up in the central area where a woodland once stood.brand-new 全新的;shopping complex 综合商场;sprang up 拔地而起;woodland 林地

Several apartment blocks were erected alongside the newly constructed main road.apartment blocks 公寓楼群;erected 修建;alongside 沿着

4)道路、河道改动

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The original narrow track was widened into a major arterial road linking the east and west districts.narrow track 窄小路;widened 拓宽;arterial road 主干道;linking 连通

The river was diverted, with its course shifted towards the north of the site.diverted 改道;course 河道走向;shifted 偏移

5)面积增减描述

The size of the park was halved, whereas the car park was doubled in its coverage area.halved 减半;coverage area 占地面积;whereas 然而

Task two:Many countries have laws banning phones use while driving, yet many drivers still use their phones while driving, even though it is against the law. why is that? How can this problem be solved?

原因:The persistent violation(持续的违规行为)of this traffic rule can be attributed to two dominant factors(两大主要因素). Firstly, the widespread reliance on digital devices(对数码设备的普遍依赖)in daily life makes it difficult for most people to detach themselves from their phones(摆脱对手机的依赖)even for a short driving journey. Modern individuals are accustomed to instant communication(即时通讯)and real-time information updates(实时信息更新), such as social media notifications(社交媒体通知)and work messages. The urge to check or reply to messages immediately(立即查看或回复信息的冲动)often overrides legal awareness(凌驾于法律意识之上), prompting drivers to take risks despite clear legal bans.

Secondly, inadequate law enforcement and lenient penalties(执法力度不足、处罚宽松)are crucial culprits(关键诱因)for this phenomenon. In many regions, traffic supervision(交通监管)is not omnipresent(无处不在的), so drivers assume they are unlikely to be caught and fined(被查处罚款). Compared with serious traffic offences such as drunk driving(酒驾), using phones while driving is regarded as a minor misdemeanour(轻微违法行为)with trivial consequences(后果轻微). This low risk of punishment(低惩罚风险)leads to widespread law-breaking behaviours among drivers.

解决方案

To curb this hazardous behaviour fundamentally(从根本上遏制危险行为), joint efforts from governments and society are indispensable(必不可少的). For authorities, it is imperative to impose harsher sanctions(实施更严厉的处罚)on offenders. Raising fines, deducting driving points(驾照扣分)and even suspending driving licences(吊销驾照)for repeated violations can greatly raise the illegal cost(提高违法成本), which serves as a powerful deterrent(强大的震慑力). Additionally, installing intelligent monitoring systems(智能监控系统)on roads can achieve round-the-clock surveillance(全天候监管)and eliminate drivers’ fluke mentality(侥幸心理).

Furthermore, public education campaigns(公共宣传活动)should be launched to enhance citizens’ safety awareness(提升公民的安全意识). The media and traffic departments can disseminate real accident cases(传播真实事故案例)caused by distracted driving(分心驾驶), enabling drivers to recognise the potentially fatal consequences(潜在的致命后果)of phone use while driving. Gradually, drivers will form voluntary compliance with traffic laws(自觉遵守交通法规)rather than obeying rules merely out of fear of punishment.

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