9月雅思大作文7分范文及解析:大学新生选择不适合的课程

报告类大作文,教育类话题

Some college freshmen find that the courses they choose are not suitable for them. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve the problem?

题目来源:2022年9月3日大陆雅思大作文

1、题目大意

一些大学新生发现他们选择的课程并不适合他们。造成这种情况的原因是什么?如何才能解决这个问题?

2、思路解析

这是一道报告类大作文,聊的是大学新生选课的问题。报告类题目结构比较简单,两个主体段分别回应两个问题,主体段一分析原因,主体段二提出解决方案。这道题目非常贴近实际,因为很多同学大学进了自己专业后都会后悔。下面月半鸭和大家来一起看下具体观点。

首先来看造成这种情况的原因,有三方面。

一是这些课程选择并非出自学生自身的意愿,二是来自于父母或家里长辈的想法。在选择专业时,有的父母会依据自己的判断或喜好来让孩子读某个专业,并且这个过程中忽略了孩子的想法和特长。而孩子由于缺乏自己的判断或无非违背父母,因此选了一个自己并不合适的专业。

二是学生在高中毕业后缺乏对于未来的规划,他们并不清楚自己在大学毕业后需要做什么,以及为了实现这个目标需要学习什么课程。因此在选课时,抱着随意的态度或是跟风的心态选择了某个课程,而在入读后才意识到这个课程并不适合自己。

三是学生缺乏对课程的具体了解,在选课前学生没有足够的渠道来了解自己未来可能就读的课程,无论是学校还是父母可能忽略了这方面的教育。进而导致学生选择了并不适合的课程。

然后来看对应的解决方案,可以从两方面入手

首先,新生应该意识到独立判断和对自己未来负责的重要性,而非一味顺从父母或盲目跟随其他人的想法。当他们能合理规划未来并且明白需要掌握哪些知识和技能后,他们做出的课程选择更加适合的课程。

其次,社会和高中应该提供更多专业规划课程,使得学生在实际选择课程之前,能有机会清楚了解到相关专业课程的具体内容,进而判断是否适合自己并做出准确的判断。

3、提纲

9.3大陆雅思大作文7分范文及解析:大学新生选择不适合的课程

4、高分范文示例

After the first year of college, students frequently lament their course selections and start performing poorly. In an age where information and technology are so readily available, it is unreasonable for students to make those choices. Thus, I believe two underlying causes exist and that each possesses a corresponding solution.

Regarding enrollment in unfavourable courses, a freshman's primary intention may be to make their parents proud. They enroll in numerous courses that satisfy their family members first. To appease their parents, consequently, freshmen disregard their interest in the courses. The second is a lack of initiative to consider future planning. They simply follow the trend without taking the time to find out what fundamental abilities their future employment would demand, nor do they evaluate where they may obtain these competencies.

I propose two realistic solutions for the two aforementioned reasons. First, freshmen must recognize that making independent decisions is equally as valuable as respecting their parents' wisdom. I am not suggesting ignoring the parents' concerns but rather simply following their guidance; students should learn to accept life's responsibilities and base all decisions on their own inner guidance and information gathering. Secondly, before enrolling, students should conduct extensive personal and professional studies. They should evaluate what essential skills their future professions will require and how to acquire those skills through these courses. In addition to credible reading sources, students can also consult with subject-matter experts.

In conclusion, it is mostly the students' responsibility to try their best and make use of all available possibilities while choosing the proper course. While many circumstances do impact a student's selection, ultimately, students are only themselves to blame if they are disappointed with their choice.

5、相关词汇和语法结构

underlying cause  深层原因、根本原因

a corresponding solution   相应解决方案

primary intention  主要意图

follow the trend  跟随潮流

aforementioned  上述的

acquire skills  掌握技能

choosing the proper course  选择合适的课程

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