2025年10月18日雅思小作文8分范文 不仅混合图表还有动态变化

混合图表

The graph and pie charts below show the percentage of population aged between 18 and 34 years old in a particular country and the percentage of this age group of people living in different regions from 1978 to 2011.

2025年10月18日雅思小作文8分范文,不仅混合图表还有动态变化2025年10月18日雅思小作文8分范文,不仅混合图表还有动态变化

题目来源:2025年10月18日大陆雅思小作文

1、题目大意

折线图和饼图显示了1978年至2011年期间,特定国家18至34岁人口的百分比以及居住在不同地区的这一年龄段人口的百分比。

2、高分范文示例

开始段 - 改写题目+总结

The line graph illustrates the percentage of the population aged 18–34 between 1978 and 2011, while the two pie charts compare the distribution of this age group across urban areas, towns, and rural areas in 1978 and 2011. Overall, the percentage of young adults in the population rose slightly during the first half of the period, before falling to a lower level by 2011. At the same time, these individuals became increasingly concentrated in urban areas, while the share living in rural regions dropped dramatically.

第一段 - 分析人口占比变化

In 1978, people aged 18–34 made up about 35% of the population. This figure climbed gradually to reach a peak of approximately 38% in 1992. However, after the early 1990s, the trend reversed, and the proportion of young adults declined steadily to around 30% by 2011, which was noticeably below the initial level.

第二段 - 居住地占比

Regarding geographical distribution, in 1978, a majority (55%) of this age bracket lived in cities, compared to 25% in rural areas and 20% in towns. By 2011, the urban share had grown to 65%, whereas the rural segment had plummeted to just 5%. Meanwhile, the proportion of 18–34-year-olds residing in towns increased to 30%.

必备语料

illustrates the proportion of 展示了......的比例

experienced a gradual rise 经历了逐步上升

reached a peak of 达到......的峰值

declined steadily to 稳步下降至

accounted for 占据了......(比例)

the majority of this age group 该年龄段的大多数人

the share of young adults living in 居住在......的年轻人比例

plummeted to just 暴跌至仅......

became increasingly concentrated in 越来越集中在......

a noticeable shift from...to... 从......到......的显著转移

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