我让ChatGPT 写了一下今天的TOEFL考题

今天的题目是 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past, teachers had a greater influence on young people than they do today.

是2021年的时候特别喜欢考的一个老题。

下面是ChatGPT 给我的第一个版本‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍

我让ChatGPT 写了一下今天的TOEFL 考题

最大的问题就是太短了,没有细节。

所以接着问了一个能不能展开到500字‍‍

下面是第二个版本的回复‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍

It's important to note that the influence of teachers on young people can vary greatly depending on the specific circumstances and context. With that said, there are a few factors that may have contributed to a perceived decline in the influence of teachers in recent years.

One possible factor is the increasing availability of information and resources online. With the proliferation of the internet and social media, young people today have access to a vast amount of information and can connect with others from all around the world. This can potentially reduce the need for teachers as a source of information and guidance, as young people can find answers to their questions or get support from their peers online.

Another factor is the changing nature of education itself. In the past, education was often more traditional and structured, with a focus on memorization and rote learning. Today, education is often more interactive and student-centered, with a greater emphasis on critical thinking, problem-solving, and collaboration. This shift may have led to a change in the role of teachers, as they may be less likely to be seen as the sole authority on a subject and more as facilitators of learning.

Technology and social media may also play a role in the perceived decline of the influence of teachers. Many young people today are active users of technology and social media, and they may be more likely to seek out information and support from their peers or from online sources rather than from their teachers. Additionally, the constant stream of information and content on social media can be overwhelming, and young people may have a harder time distinguishing between reliable sources and misinformation. This can potentially reduce the perceived credibility and influence of teachers.

It's worth noting that these are just a few possible factors that may have contributed to a perceived decline in the influence of teachers. There are also many other factors that could potentially have an impact, such as changes in societal attitudes towards education and the role of teachers, the increasing demands on teachers and schools, and the impact of policies and funding on education.

Overall, while it is difficult to make a definitive statement about the relative influence of teachers in the past versus today, it is clear that teachers have always played a crucial role in the development and education of young people. Despite the challenges and changes they face, teachers continue to make a positive impact on the lives of their students and are an integral part of the education system.

整题回复了420+ 的字数,这个乐观说体现出来了ChatGPT 还是在意内容的完整性的,不会死抠字数;但往cynical 想,如果在意内容完整的话,也大可以超过500 这个界限,至少我是不介意的。

撇开这个字数要求不说,整体文章结构,展开和语言都是不错的。‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍

结构上很规整,只是如果是在乎critical thinking的考试或者任务来说,目前的这个版本可能角度太为单一了,毕竟中间展开只是列举了几个平行的factors。‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍‍

结构上好的地方是不管是全文还是单个段落都是很好的总分结构。结构上可以挑剔的地方是最后一段不是对于中间段内容的直接总结,一般建议考试写作时候还是对应的直白点比较好。

展开上细节是可以更多的,比如

Technology and social media may also play a role in the perceived decline of the influence of teachers. Many young people today are active users of technology and social media, and they may be more likely to seek out information and support from their peers or from online sources rather than from their teachers. Additionally, the constant stream of information and content on social media can be overwhelming, and young people may have a harder time distinguishing between reliable sources and misinformation. This can potentially reduce the perceived credibility and influence of teachers.

上面这个段落的细节展开是蓝色的两点,这两句点后面都可以再加上2-3句的细节来具体说下,比如第一点的后面可以说下young people 现在是如何用online sources 的,导致老师的influence 下降;第二句的后面同理。

展开上更为不理想的是倒数第二段

It's worth noting that these are just a few possible factors that may have contributed to a perceived decline in the influence of teachers. There are also many other factors that could potentially have an impact, such as changes in societal attitudes towards education and the role of teachers, the increasing demands on teachers and schools, and the impact of policies and funding on education.

这个段落就成了单纯的罗列点了,细节的证明都不见了。

语言表达的角度来说,这是一篇很好的文章,流畅、清晰和表达丰富度都很好。

Overall,从备考角度来说,ChatGPT,这个目前在文字交互上最被赞誉的chatbot 可以供我们学习的

1. 构思(在有些想不到点的话题上,虽然ChatGPT也不能给我们太多细节,但是至少能给好多个思考的方向)

2. 语言表达

综上,外界的都是辅助,提高写作最好的方式还是多写。

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