今天推送的是5月17日·托福·考题分析.以下思路和范文仅供同学们学习·参考。
整体难度：中等
综合写作回忆
一个1950s出土的manuscript是否是Chaucer之前一部astronomy book的第三部分reading材料说是，给了三个理由（subject matters，name，和handwriting），听力是三个反驳@179期 X.
学术讨论写作
Dr. Achebe
Today we will discuss a topic that is important for students and the public at large: namely, how to prioritize spending, given the limited funding available for schools. Some people think schools should spend more money on school teachers’ salaries because, if the salaries improved, more qualified people will be attracted to the profession. Others believe the money should be spent on additional resources such as books and computers. Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Kelly:
I believe that increasing teachers' salaries will improve the quality of education. If they earn more money, people will consider teaching as a viable profession rather than opting for private sector jobs. We need the brightest minds in the classrooms.
Paul:
I acknowledge that school teachers already earn a decent salary and provide high-quality education. I'm not certain how much of an impact increasing their salaries would have. Nonetheless, schools always require new equipment or facilities. Knowledge and technology are constantly evolving, and we need to prepare students with the most up-to-date materials.
审题注意点:一.这道题重复了24年12月8日的考试原题. 也命中了day4的作业原题！这也是写作团今年第11次命中原题！
(3)可行的角度和思路：
1. "given the limited funding available for schools."从学校角度：
学校的资金也是有限的。可以分析哪一个选项会给学校造成大的经济压力。比如，相对而言，购买更多的书籍, 电脑等是一笔不菲的开销。为了负担这个支出，可能会需要提升学费、或者政府收更多的税收来拨款…(写作团-政府话题思路)
2. 学生的角度：
老师对学生的影响比其他资源更大一些。因为老师不仅能给他们讲述课本上的复杂知识，还给学生传授一些重要的价值观。比如, 帮助一些问题少年回到正轨等(写作团语料/老师的功能)。这些都是其他教学资源比如书籍做不到的。所以，老师值得更高的薪水，促使他们更加努力工作，帮助学生…
3."more qualified people will be attracted to the profession".老师的角度：
提供工资才会让老师更投入工作，和吸引到有才华的人做老师。因为现在老师工资很低，很多老师无法养家糊口，所以很多有才华的人都不愿意从事教师的行业。但是, 如果学校提升他们的工资。在职老师就会认真工作；有才华的人就愿意加入老师的队伍…
4. “books and computers”设备：
好的教学设备能够帮助学生更有效地理解知识。很多知识对学生来说都比较抽象，比如天文宇宙，物理学中的光波传输… 这些知识无论老师的阐释多么清晰，学生可能还是觉得难以理解。但是，如果学校购买一些先进的设备，比如天文望远镜，投影仪等… 学生就能看到… （写作团语料）
⭕️ 语料需要改编，切合自己行文思路运用。请勿直接生搬硬套。
参考范文:
I side with Kelly. I also believe that schools should prioritize increasing teachers' salaries over investing in other educational resources.Teachers play a pivotal role in students' developmentthat extends far beyond what textbooks or computers can offer.They not only conveycomplex knowledgebut also answer students' questions on various life issues, including relationships, and evenguide juvenile delinquents onto the right track.However, despite their significance, teachers often find themselves underpaid.The average annual income for a teacher is approximately ten thousand dollars, roughly equivalent to that of a construction worker.Consequently,many educators are forced to take on part-time jobs or private tutoring sessions just to make ends meet, compromising their availability to students in need.If schools were to increase their salaries, teachers would be more willing and able togo the extra milefor their students.This could include staying after school toaddress individual questions or tailoring lesson plans to better cater to diverse learning needs.Therefore, if the aim is to foster a more effective educational environment, schools would be wise to focus on adequately compensating their teaching staff.
第5套
整体难度：中等
综合写作回忆
暂缺
学术讨论写作
Doctor Diaz:
As you approach graduation, you may be considering your next steps for further education. Some opt to enroll full-time to complete an advanced degree as quickly as possible. Others choose to work while slowly progressing towards a degree. Given these options, I'm curious to know your thoughts.After finishing your undergraduate studies, do you prefer pursuing an advance degree full-time or continuing work while studying part-time?
Andrew:
I think it's better to go to college full-time instead of trying to balance part-time classes and a full-time job. For me, I know l wouldn't be able to focus on my studies if l was exhausted from work all the time. Full-time college allows me to put all my energy into my classes and get the most out of my education. Trying to do both college and work full-time seems way too stressful for me to handle. I'd rather get my degree done faster by being a full time student.
Claire：
I think going to college part-time while working is better because I cause what l learn in class at my job right away. The classes feel more relevant when I'm able to apply the material to real work situationsInstead of just memorizing concepts, I get to see how they work in practice. And getting work experience while I study looks good on my resume. I think balancing the two helps me get more out of my classes and prepares me for my career at the same time. I'd rather take ciasses part-time and work than just study full-time.
审题注意点:
1. 这道题重复了25年2月22日的考题。
2. 可行的思路：
其他2位同学的思路都比较好写，大家可以站队。
--同意Andrew. 全职上班的同时还要上课，真的太难了。最后可能2方面都没有做好。+现在人们工作非常忙碌: 不仅早上要一大早通勤，白天要忙于各种事务，参加冗长无聊的会议。（写作团有语料） + 如果下班后，周末还要去参加课程的话，他们可能还要晚上熬夜读paper, 赶着写reflection, 假期放弃跟家人聚会去参加小组讨论。第二天又拖着疲惫的身体去公司上班。 +这样可能不仅会影响工作效率/出错，也会导致课程中很多复杂知识消耗不好，最终2方都没做好。所以，不建议边full time 上班边读学位。
--同意Claire. 这种方式可以有利于提升工作表现。因为在读书的时候，可以把自己工作中遇到的问题跟教授，其他同学讨论，这样获得很多新的思路和灵感，有利于工作提升。+比如，我就参加了这样一个人工智能的学习项目。 我就向教授咨询如何让ai 来帮助我完成我的工作，比如制定广告销售计划，写有吸引力的slogan.（写作团语料）教授向我讲解了ai的工作原理和一些小技巧。+后面我就很快速地掌握了，运用到自己的工作中。现在我负责销售的电脑的销量是之前的2倍。+ 要不是当时我参加了这种课程 ，我就不会在工作上得到了这样的成功。+所以我学得边工作变读书是很明智的。
参考范文:
I agree with Andrew. Trying to take classes while working full-time is incredibly challenging. In the end, one mayend upnot performing well in either area. Nowadays, people's work schedules are incredibly hectic:not only do they have to commute early in the morning, but they also have to manage various tasks during the day, including attending long and tedious meetings.If, on top of that,they have to attend courses after work or on weekends, they might find themselvesstaying up late to read papers, rushing to write reflections, or even giving up family gatherings during holidays to participate in group discussions.Then they would drag their weary bodies to work the next day. This pattern could lead not only to decreased work efficiency and increased mistakes but also to a poor absorption of the complex knowledge required in their courses.Ultimately, they might fail to succeed in both domains. Therefore, I would advise against pursuing a degree while working full-time.
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