对于map题,大家不是没有思路,只是无奈句型跟不上思路的节奏,最后写出来的内容千篇一律都是简单句的拼凑。
比如这个题目中
题目上面会有很多内容,我们一起列举一下
Fountain/Stage for musicians/Rose gardens/Pond for water plants/Glasshouse/Entrance/Seats/
这么多的内容如果要放在作文中,句型拿捏不好的同学很容易写成并列的简单句。
比如 there were many rose gardens and many seats around them,亦或者:A fountain was built in the center of the park and a stage for musicians was constructed next to the fountain,and there are many rose gardens nearby...... 所有的这些句型其实都是在把图标内容罗列~(这个几乎是所有雅思考生在写地图题的时候会出现的bug)
作为一个雅思考生,如果遇到了地图题,这种“简单there be”句型要做到一个升级使用。
今天教给大家一个比较讨巧的,且吸引考官的升级版there be 结构
辣就是:there be+ with的句型结构。
在开始这个结构之前,先插播一个 there be 句型的用法,就是“就近原则”
比如这有一把刀和一把叉子,很多同学可能会犯迷糊
应该是there is a folk and a knife 还是 there are a folk and a knife
答案是第一个:“there is a folk and a knife”
因为there be 的使用是符合就近原则的,所以be+复数,我们就用are;be+单数,我们就用is
比如:there are many trees and a park in the school
there is a garden and many trees around the school
说完这个就近原则,咱们再回到there be+with结构中
比如,刚才大家写到:there were many rose gardens and many seats around them。
如果在地图题中,我们要同时描述两个对象,我们可以把第二个对象变成with补充成分
这句话就可以写成:there were many rose gardens,withmany seats around them,这么一些,这个句子就可以变成6+的句式结构
大家可以在评论区做一个写作小练习:这个公园里面有一个为音乐家准备的舞台,周围有两个玫瑰园和许多椅子。
那如果大家还想再把句型结构提升到6.5+的话
还有一个小妙招,就是在地点名词后面+过去分词结构
比如there are many rose gardens,with many seatssituated around them.这句话中的situated 就是过去分词后置做定语,可以换成located,placed,built,表示被安置在,被坐落在的意思。
紧接着来个小练习比如我们在描述下方entrance 的时候,我们可以发下,在entrance 的右边/东边 有一个 glasshouse(玻璃屋)
我们就可以用there be+with(with中包含过去分词后置定语)的结构
There was an entrance in the south of the garden, with a glasshouse situated nearby.
此外,除了there be+with(with里面包含过去分词后置定语)的结构之外,我们there be句型还可以变换一下:
把地点状语提前至there be之前,提升句子的灵活度。
比如 In the south of the garden, there was an entrance
Around rose gardens, there were many seats
甚至我们还可以在后面接上with结构或者过去分词的结构
比如Around rose gardens there were many seats situated nearby.
Around the edges of the park, there were many rose gardens, with many seats situated nearby. (在这个公园的四周,有很多玫瑰园而且旁边还有很多椅子
