事实上，很多写作老师也持同样观点，因此在写作教学过程中让学生用所谓高级词汇替换低级词汇（比如用 “I reckon”来代替 “I think”），并认为这样可以获得阅卷老师赞赏，从而获得更好的分数。
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比如：complex; list of favourites; fits...my ability; specific area; many available channels.
从这个评价中，我们可以看到，雅思7分作文词汇需要一定的幅度，同时需要正式的文体和正确的搭配，不能有过于口语或方言式的表达。这里顺便说一句，被很多雅思老师推崇的“I reckon”，在表达“I suppose/think”这个意义时，其实只是一种特定群体才用的方言，不适合用于雅思作文中。
那么，“一定幅度的词汇”指哪些词汇呢？看看考官举出的例子：complex, favorite, specific, available......，我们发现，所谓高分词汇，其实不是那些吓人的词汇，而是一些相对不常用的普通词汇而已。
题目：Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree? (《剑桥雅思9》，test 2)
高分范文：It has been suggested that high school students should be involved in unpaid community services as a compulsory part of high school programmes. Most of the colleges are already providing opportunities to give work experience, however these are not compulsory. In my opinion, sending students to work in community services is a good idea as it can provide them with many sorts of valuable skills. Life skills are very important and by doing voluntary work, students can learn how to communicate with others and work in a team but also how to manage their time and improve their organisational skills. Nowadays, unfortunately, teenagers do not have many after-school activities. After-school clubs are no longer that popular and students mostly go home and sit in front of the TV, browse the Internet or play Video games. By giving them compulsory work activities with charitable or community organisations, they will be encouraged to do something more creative. Skills gained through compulsory work will not only be an asset on their CV but also increase their employability. Students will also gain more respect towards work and money as they will realise that it is not that easy to earn them and hopefully will learn to spend them in a more practical way. Healthy life balance and exercise are strongly promoted by the NHS, and therefore any kind of spare time charity work will prevent them from sitting and doing nothing. It could also possibly reduce the crime level in the high school age group. If students have activities to do, they will not be bored and come up with silly ideas which can be dangerous for them or their surroundings. In conclusion, I think this is a very good idea, and I hope this programme will be put into action for high schools and colleges shortly.
大家不妨看看黑体字标示出来的高分词汇和词组：involve, provide, compulsory, valuable, organisational, browse, creative, asset, practical, promote, shortly，这些词汇即使在大学英语四级词汇表里，也算不上最难的词汇。而且，这还是所谓的“9分作文”，如果烤鸭的目标仅仅是7分，还可以进一步将其中某些词汇简单化。
比如这句：Skills gained through compulsory work will not only be an asset on their CV but also increase their employability. 如果考生对 “an asset on...”和 “employability”的用法不熟悉，可以将本句改为：Skills gained through compulsory work will not only be an attractive part of their CV but also help them find a job.
此外，笔者还想评论一下本范文最后一段中的 “I think this is a very good idea”。很多所谓金牌雅思老师或雅思书籍上的金牌规则都告诉学生，不要用I think，不要用good, 不要用a very good idea，因为这些太低级，太口语化。但事实上，在高分范文中，类似表达并不少见。
题目：The spread of multinational companies and the resulting increase in globalization produce positive effects to everyone. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?（210109）
某公众号提供的范文：The world is moving in a direction where the tentacles of cross-national corporations are reaching to all corners of the world. While this trend has been applauded by the devotees of globalization as a blessing for everyone, I will say it is a generalized opinion ignoring the discrete interests of individuals. There seems to be reasons why the prosperity of multinational companies and the ensuing globalization is assumed beneficial to all. Those who think in this way may point to legions of advantages in daily life, whether these be job opportunities, equal accessibility to the same product from any corners of the world, or the easy to reach after sales service wherever they go.
Examples regarding these including the international brands such as Dell, Apple and MacDonald, all of which play a key role in employment and their products are becoming an imperative part in lives of various demographics.
Given this, here comes the assumption that the populace is the whole beneficiary of a globalized economy. Plausible though it seems, it is difficult for me to see the veneration of a globalized business world as a blessing to all. Those who focus on its positive side of this trend are oblivious to the fact that the ramifications of any social episodes should be domain specific and context dependent.
Based on this, the discussion can then move on to hand questions as to which social impacts are more desirable in the local context or what local stakeholders value more.
From the perspective of local industries in developing countries, the relentless invasion of international brands may oust them from local market. To complicate mattes even more, the disappearance of indigenous artefacts may jeopardize the national identity and cultural diversity in the world. From what has been discussed above, it is my opinion therefore, the benefits of a globalized economy dominated by multinational companies do not apply to everyone.
从用词的角度，本文使用了不少超纲词汇，比如tentacle, discrete, legions, populace, beneficiary, demographics, plausible, veneration, ramification, oust, indigenous，其中很多词汇都是误用，或让本来明确的意思变得很朦胧。
令人匪夷所思的是，在一篇看起来正规得拿腔拿调的作文中，突然出现一句非常口语化的 “here comes the assumption that...”，读起来实在让人忍俊不禁。