第1套
综合写作回忆
命中写作团day16作业原题·这也是团里今年第29次命中原题了。
石油泄漏治理方法
1. 这些细菌已经进化出只能消耗石油的能力。它们天然只能在含有天然石油的海洋中生存。因此，一旦石油被耗尽，这些细菌自然会死亡，避免对当地生态系统造成长期的支配。
2. 这些营养物质可能造成的潜在损害与未经处理的石油泄漏所造成的破坏相比是微不足道的。传统的清理方法反应缓慢，允许有毒的石油在环境中停留足够长的时间，足以杀死大量生命。
3. 这些包括对当地渔业的赔偿以及可能因旅游业和其他产业受损而导致的罚款。这样的经济负担为公司提供了强烈的动机，促使它们保持严格的泄漏预防措施。
学术讨论写作
教授：
On the day of outdoor classes, students will be transported to local parks. There, teachers will help students explore nature and learn about the environment (for example, plants and animals), environmental problems (such as pollution), and ways of addressing these problems.Do you think that outdoor classes once a month will be a worthwhile use of students' instructional time and school resources?
Kelly:
We should avoid burdening teachers with additional responsibilities during instructional time. Teachers are already tasked with delivering quality education and managing classrooms effectively. Adding more duties, such as administrative tasks or non-teaching responsibilities, can divert their focus from teaching. Instead, we should prioritize supporting teachers in their primary role.
Andrew:
Hands-on learning outside the classroom can help students understand environmental problems in a tangible way and spark their interest to learn more. For example, measuring air or water quality in local areas impacted by pollution can vividly demonstrate environmental threats. Outdoor learning experiences make environmental issues real to students, motivating them to care about finding solutions.
审题注意点:
(1)道题重复了今年6月14日的考题。 也曾经是写作团176期以前团里day3的原题。
(2). 题目的背景重点强调了：There, teachers will help students explore nature and learn about the environment (for example, plants and animals), environmental problems (such as pollution), and ways of addressing these problems.“老师会带着学生探索自然，学习环境的一些知识（比如，植物和动物), 了解环境问题(比如污染), 和之列环境问题的方法”.所以这个题目已经比较明确地给我们强调outdoor activities的主要内容了。所以大家现在分析的时候，建议大家注重写环境方面。
(3). 可行的分论点：
1. 其他二位同学的观点也比较常规, 好想，也比较容易展开。大家可以使用，扩写。
2. 好处：
① 激发学生的学习兴趣/学生会学得更好。不同于在教室里听老师的授课，学生可以真实都看到外在世界，发现一些环境问题：比如雾霾city smog/动物栖息地减少habitat loss。运用课堂上的知识解决一些问题(students can witness real-world applications of what they learn)。觉得课堂很有用，就会认真学习。
② 有利于学生开阔视野，学到更多的内容。（Exposure to nature and environmental issues can deepen their understanding and interest：native flora and fauna）
坏处：
①学习效率不高，老师管理起来很麻烦。比如小朋友被环境分心，不好好听老师的讲解。
②浪费学校的资源。学校一般都花了很多钱有自己的实验室，已经足够让学生去学习。（The cost-effectiveness of using in-house labs vs. field trips）
③给学校和老师带来额外的负担。学校要支付额外的费用，比如学生的车费，餐费，甚至还要安排更多的老师来管理学生。(Financial strain on school budgets.)
参考范文:
I concur with Andrew that it is beneficial for schools to integrate outdoor classes into students curriculum.My conviction stems from the real-world understandingthat outdoor experiences provides to students.让相比于让学生整天坐在教室里，盯着黑板，听老师讲授一些枯燥的知识点,学生更喜欢在教室外自由的环境中学习知识。(students are justeithermindlessly scribbling down complex mathematical equations or staring at the blackboard without reallyputting thoughts in it, an outdoor environment offers a more interactive and engaging learning experience).比如，学生们很容易走神当老师滔滔不绝地讲环境保护有多重要，但是当学生们在公园里亲眼看到因为整个城市因为工厂大量燃烧煤炭导致酸雨频发,当地河流中的鱼类都大量死亡后(However, witnessing firsthand the detrimental effects of environment neglect, such as the local fish populations being threaten with extinction due tothe frequent acid rain caused by the burning of fossil fuels)，他们就会更投入地学习，专研解决措施(students are more likely to become actively involved in their learning and seek solutions to these pressing issues).In conclusion...
第2套
综合写作回忆
暂缺
学术讨论写作
Dr. Gupta：This week, we are discussing the social psychology ofsports.Wehave learned that sports often have positive psychological effectson athletes, such as the members of sports teams. But how can wedescribe their effects on other groups of people, such as sportsenthusiasts or sports fans? Consider the following question: When people spend a lot of time watching sports or following theirfavorite team, does it have a negative effect on their lives? Why orwhy not.Claire:I agree that focusing on sports too much can have negativeimpacts. For example, some people who like watching sports ontelevision have few otherinterests.In fact, it seems like watchingsports is all they're interested in.lsometimes find such peopleannoying because they care too much about things that don'tmatter.Paul：I am not sure what we mean by spending "a lot of time" followingsports. But following sports has helped me in life. When l first metone of my best friends, Daphne,lstarted a conversation with her bysaying something about a sports team lliked. Then we moved toother topics, but sports were a great conservation-starter.
审题注意点:
(1)这道题重复了今年1月的海外场考题+ 24年6.16日考题.
(2) . 媒体和运动话题，老师公众号里提供了很多相关的语料。
团里也提供了很多关于 运动，健康，电视等具体语料，大家应该觉得很好写。
(3). 可行的分论点：
这个题包含了 电视，运动2个话题，所以切入点也很多。
(1) 坏处
坏处1：长时间看体育比赛不利于健康。现在体育项目一般都超过2个小时以上，比如网球，篮球，足球。导致人们一直坐着看，但是自己就不去运动，不利于身体健康。尤其是很多在国外举行的比赛，导致人们会熬夜。
坏处2:同意第一位同学。电视上有很多广告，不利于充分享受看比赛的乐趣。
(2)好处：
好处1：让人体会到不同的顶级体育赛事带来的乐趣。很多人不喜欢某种运动和体育，是因为他们没有体会过其中的乐趣。这些运动可能在他们所在的地区并不流行。但是通过电视收看到最顶尖的运动员的比赛，看到观众的热烈反应，体会到其中的紧张刺激和欢乐，他们就会被带动，沉浸到比赛中，帮助他们忘掉自己生活的烦恼，甚至爱上运动，自己也亲自参与进去。比如，滑雪/网球在我所在的城市并不流行，但是看到了谷爱凌的比赛/法国网球公开赛，看到他们优美的体态，投入的比赛，也让很多人爱上了…
好处2：同意第二位同学，结交很多同样喜欢的朋友，有相同话题聊。
好处3：观看比赛，也可以帮助人们塑造很多重要的品质，比如乐观，坚持。因为比赛是很残酷的。当人们看到运动员们为了争夺冠军付出了极大的努力，专注，他们就很容易受到鼓舞，自己生活中遇到问题的时候，就会想起自己喜欢的运动明星，被他们鼓舞.
参考范文:
Echoing the perspective of xxx, I believe that spending excessive time watching sports brings significant drawbacks to fans, particularly concerning their health.Major and popular games, such as the European Football Cup, NBA, and French Open, often last at least two hours, and if there’s a tie, the duration extends even longer. This can negatively impact fans' health. For instance, fans may become so engrossed in the game that they neglect physical activity themselves, choosing instead to spend their time watching.Furthermore, due to time zone differences, fans might stay up late into the night to watch a game held elsewhere. Most fans have work or school the next day, and staying up late to watch even the most exciting finals can result in dizziness and fatigue, leading to mistakes at work or school.
In conclusion,...
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