文章目录[隐藏]
- 你为什么想学习这个课程或学科?
- 你的资质和学习如何帮助你准备这门课程或科目?
- 你在教育之外还做了哪些准备工作?这些经历为什么有用?
- AI生成的反馈
- Why do you want to study this course or subject?
- How have your qualifications and studies helped you to prepare for this course or subject?
- What else have you done to prepare outside of education, and why are these experiences useful?
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你为什么想学习这个课程或学科?
我们生活在一个经历了显著变化的世界——从共产主义的垮台到通过全球化实现国家之间的联系。然而,我们仍然生活在一个极度贫困的世界——从贫困和不平等的普遍存在,到对资源可持续性的担忧。我在印度出生和成长,后来定居英国,这两种经济体的经历正好体现了这些变化。印度是极端贫困与难以想象的富裕并存的感人例子。作为领先的经济强国,英国关注点不同——比如如何维持其经济和国际领先地位。所有这些因素点燃了我对经济学的兴趣,最终我在A level阶段选修了经济学和数学。
阅读《泰晤士报》时,我们发现经济学是许多新闻的核心。这进一步激发了我对更深入知识的追求,这也促使我阅读了《金融时报》和《经济学人》。我是个贪婪的读者。在我读过的许多书籍中,有些与经济学有关。其中一本书,N. N. 塔勒布的《黑天鹅》,是一本发人深省的书,揭示了用于评估风险的金融模型存在缺陷,因为它们无法预测风险的全部影响。此外,我非常喜欢R. Rajan的《断层线》一书。拉詹是一位预测全球金融危机的经济学家,他提出了引人入胜的观点,指出不仅金融部门引发了危机,还有经济中其他严重缺陷,这些问题加剧了这场危机。
经济学让我很感兴趣;它帮助我理解你经常听到的概念。我非常喜欢这个学科,因为它不仅是一个广泛且应用广泛的学科,而且逻辑合理且涉及解决问题。我想进一步学习经济学,因为我想对这个学科有更深入的理解。我坚信我对这门学科的热情和热情将帮助我实现目标。
你的资质和学习如何帮助你准备这门课程或科目?
我发现经济学和数学是互补的。作为一名数学学生,我非常喜欢解决具有挑战性的问题。学习进阶数学帮助我理解了学科的复杂性,以及解决挑战带来的满足感。我在校内外都赢得了数学挑战,2010年凭借我的毅力和奉献精神获得了“年度数学学生”称号。
你在教育之外还做了哪些准备工作?这些经历为什么有用?
我在Kotak Mahindra UK Limited投资银行工作,这也是我工作经历的一部分,这段经历非常宝贵。期间,FSA进行了监管访问,使我得以更多了解他们的角色。我协助合规部门准备这次访问——内容涵盖了制作电子表格和客户文件的制作。我跟随了几个部门,深入了解了每个部门的工作内容,以及每个部门虽然独立,但如何相互补充,共同实现共同目标。这种与金融行业的接触进一步加深了我对经济学的兴趣。
业余时间,我在当地学校做志愿者,该校帮助有学习障碍的成年人——我不仅参与社交活动,还培训人们发展IT技能。这段经历帮助我提升了耐心和沟通能力。我还在一家慈善商店做志愿者,这帮助我提升了团队合作和组织能力。我也是学校理事会的重要贡献者,协助组织筹款活动,比如组织校服日和烘焙义卖,以为慈善机构筹款。
AI生成的反馈
这些反馈由人工智能生成,基于这份个人陈述的文本:
这份个人陈述展现了对经济学的强烈且真诚的兴趣,辅以个人背景和相关阅读,这是一项显著的优势。数学与经济学的明确联系凸显了其全面的学术基础。投资银行的工作经验和志愿服务显示出成熟度和学术界内外可转移的技能。
为了改进,声明可以更好地整合与经济学相关的具体动机和职业抱负,详细说明大学学习如何帮助实现这些目标。此外,通过完善句子以保持清晰,避免轻微重复,将提升可读性。包含申请人最感兴趣的经济学概念或理论的具体例子,可以使该陈述在2026年及以后新的UCAS个人陈述期望背景下更具特色。
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Why do you want to study this course or subject?
We live in a world which has undergone remarkable changes - from the fall of communism to the interlinking of countries through globalisation. Yet, we still live in a world with remarkable deprivation - from the widespread prevalence of poverty and inequality to the fears of the sustainability of our resources. Being born and brought up in India and then coming to live in the UK, my experience of these two economies epitomises some of these changes. India is a poignant example of extreme poverty and unimaginable affluence existing side by side. Being a leading economic power, the concerns in the UK are different - such as sustaining its economic and international pre-eminence. All these facets ignited an interest in Economics within me, culminating in my taking up Economics and Maths at A level.
Reading “The Times” has highlighted the fact that economics forms the core of much news. This has further fuelled my search for more in-depth knowledge, which has lead to my reading of “The Financial Times” and “The Economist”. I am a voracious reader. Among the many books I have read, some are related to economics. One such book, "Black Swan" by N. N. Taleb, is a thought provoking book which gives a new insight into how the financial models which are used to assess risks, are flawed as they don't predict the full impact of such risks. Furthermore, I thoroughly enjoyed the book "Fault Lines" by R. Rajan. Rajan, an economist who predicted the global financial crisis, gave a compelling view of how it was not just the financial sector that caused the crisis but also other serious flaws in the economy, which exacerbated this crisis.
Economics intrigues me; it helps me understand concepts which you hear regularly. I thoroughly enjoy the subject as not only is it a broad subject with wide practical applications but is also logical and involves problem solving. I would like to pursue studying Economics further, as I would like to gain a more in-depth understanding of the subject. I thoroughly believe that my passion and enthusiasm for this subject will help me attain my goals.
How have your qualifications and studies helped you to prepare for this course or subject?
I find that Economics and Maths complement each other. As a Maths student, I thoroughly enjoy solving problems that are challenging. Taking Further Maths has helped me to appreciate the complexities associated with the subject and the satisfaction gained from solving the challenges. I have won maths challenges in and out of school, winning the title of "Maths student of the year" in 2010, due to my perseverance and dedication.
What else have you done to prepare outside of education, and why are these experiences useful?
I have had an invaluable experience of working at Kotak Mahindra UK Limited, an investment bank, as a part of my work experience. During this time, the FSA undertook their regulatory visit, enabling me to find out more about their role. I helped the compliance department prepare for the visit - ranging from making spreadsheets to helping make cliental documents. I shadowed a few departments and gained a deeper understanding of what each department does and how each department, though independent, complements each other towards the achievement of the common goal. This exposure to the financial industry has further reinforced my interest in economics.
In my spare time, I volunteer at my local school which helps adults with learning disabilities - where I help not only at social events but also training people to develop their IT skills. This experience has helped me improve my patience and communications skills. I also volunteer at a charity shop which has helped me to improve my teamwork and organizational skills. I was also a key contributor in my school council, helping to organise fundraising events, such as organising non-school uniform days and bake sales, in order to raise money for charities.

