雅思写作纸考写作真题分析

题目:Some ex-prisoners commit crimes after being released from prison. What do you think is the cause? How can it be solved?

类似题目:People continue to commit crimes even after being punished. Why do you think this happens? How can crime be stopped? 20201107原题 

今天的大作文还是mixed题型。

从统计来看,自疫情后,官方对这种题型越来越看重。

2020年整年的考试取消了很多场,但mixed题型考了很多

之后的2021、2022两年,也基本上维持了第二的地位,只比agree题型少一点。

再结合我发现的另一个有趣的数据:前些年,内地学生的写作平均分是5.3几,但最新的统计显示平均分已经是5.5。

导致我不禁心生疑惑:到底是内地学生的写作水平真的提高了?还是内地的写作难度确实有所下降?或许兼而有之?

持续观察吧,保持跟踪。

不管怎么说,这对于咱们内地考的同学,都算是好事。

说回题目。

题目有两问,总体上不难。一问一段,两个问题回答清楚即可。

今天大作文的主题是犯罪类话题,与2020年11月的原题非常类似。

按以往的考试情况推测的话,近期纸考再考犯罪类话题的可能性会小很多。毕竟很少出现连着几次都同一个话题的。

而且犯罪话话题本来就考得少,一年也有偶尔几次(3次左右)。所以重点还是建议放在政府、教育、科技三大类上面。

接下来看两个例文(文章整理自网络,供参考)

例文1:

It is true that a large number of criminals do not change and keep on committing crimes even after punishment. There are several reasons for repeating crimes after serving a term and various steps can be taken to prevent such behaviour at societal as well as government level.

There are a few reasons to explain the behaviour of criminals after they come out serving time in prison. Firstly, although they might be reformed individuals, some societies still see them as guilty and do not accept them as members of their community. The rejection and social alienationtempt ex-prisoners to take revenge and commit crimes again. Secondly, their past criminal recordsmake it difficult forex-prisoners to find employment. Consequently, they get into crime to get over their poverty. Finally, some are professional criminals. They want to earn money quickly so they commit crimes like burglary, extortion, robbery and blackmailing. They are so used to making money easily that they cannot stop it even after getting punished.

There are several actions that can be taken to curb the problems. The government should enforce strong vocational trainingso that they do have options available when they are released. Apart from that, all prisoners should be counselled by psychologists who can evaluate their behaviour and mental status. This way, potential re-offenderscan be identified easily and special attention be given to them. In addition to that, it is the responsibility of the police department to train and educate the public about the behavioural and circumstantial aspects of any crime. By doing so, they can create acceptance for reformed criminals and give them an opportunity to lead a normal life after serving punishment.

In conclusion, most of the times, there are specific reasons for ex-criminals to commit crimes again. However, there are several measures that the society and the government can take to curb their criminal tendencies.

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例文2:

It is true that some criminals commit crimes again after they have been punished. While there are several reasons for this alarming trend, some effective measures can be taken by governments to tackle this problem.

There are two main reasons for re-offenders. Firstly, the prison system can make the situation worse. Criminals are put together in prison and they make friends with other offenders. While they are locked up in prison, they do not have much to do there, and they would exchange information about what they have done before they came to the prison or they may plan crimes with other inmatesSecondly, offenders often do not have any other means of earning money. They are poor, uneducated and lacking skills needed to maintain a job. Also, a criminal record makes finding a job difficult as people usually avoid hiring ex-convict.

To solve this problem, governments should focus on rehabilitation of criminals rather than punishment. Above all, prisons need vocational training which makes inmates to prepare for life outside the prison. They can learn practical skills such as computer programming, car maintenance and graphic design. In this way, they can be hired for a position that requires this certain knowledge and skills. Community service is another way to reform offenders. Rather than being locked up in prison with other inmates, offenders can help society and become useful to their local community, and these activities would eliminate the negative influence that prisons can have.

In conclusion, these offenders are one of the problems in our community; it can be solved by focusing on rehabilitation rather than punishment itself.

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